More and more animal species are becoming extinct by humann activities in land and sea.
What are the reasons and solutions ?
In recent year, there has been a common observation that human activities has caused the extinctions of more and more animal species. Obviously, the reasons of this situation are quite complicated. In addtition, societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.
One of the main reason for the extinctions of animal species is an First, the governments should pass some laws in order to converse the habitats of animal, such as forests, oceans. For instance, Canada prohibit fishing from January to March, which ensure the laying time of several fish. Another solvingshould be focused on human awareness. To illustratee, some organizations, like WFO, THE CROSS were established to protect animal. These groups provide lots of efficient activities: planning forests, encouraging people to have social responsibilities of protecting other species.
In conclusion, the extinctions on animal species which are caused by human activities is a big concern for many people, so dealing with this issue require a lot of efforts and proper decisions from many supports.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 65, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, as for, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 166.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47590361446 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0211248781 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692771084337 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5838045213 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195742100543 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669166196374 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976333532825 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137541625931 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739646608696 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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