Any attempts to preserve the natural world will always hinder economic development. The benefits will however far outweigh the disadvantages. Do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that the solutions applied to protect the environment are the obstacles in economic development. Although the drawbacks can be found to some extent, this conduct has several significant advantages. From my perspective, the benefits should be the elements are worth mentioning when we look at the reality of society.
To begin with, many advantages are deriving from raising people’s awareness of preserving the natural world. One of them is that there will be no space for a human to live and work when the environment is absolutely destroyed and seriously populated. Despite the achievements people gain in boosting the economy, that environment is damaged will make them in vain and this will also be at crisis and collapsed as a result. Besides, protecting the environment means protecting the diversity of resources not only for the present day but also the future generation. Notwithstanding the age people are in, sustainable development is an outstanding goal they constantly desire to achieve. Natural resources always play an essential role in the manufacturing and operating machines as well as products in the modern industry. The clear illustration is that the country with the lack of mineral deposits usually faces great difficulties in building and developing domestic economy.
On the other hand, the downside coming along with those merits can be easily seen. The fear of damaging the environment may exert an impact on the exploitation of the natural resources utilized for economic benefits. Frequently, because of this reluctance, the economic growth rate of the country will decrease and the negative influences will come if that situation lasts long and appropriate methods are not adopted to resolve.
All things considered, conserving the environment is the key to build up an active economy and boost the industrialization and modernization of a country. Those prominent advantages are superior to the negative side of the same issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, may, so, well, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35897435897 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10533755038 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599358974359 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3082572345 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.466666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146710851565 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425905631011 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405497763294 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722461331603 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558018292006 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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