Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There aremany matures working at home, and more children start learning in their house, due to the convenience of technology like cheap and accessible. In my point of view, I think that this is a positive, in this essay I will expain the reason why I believed this.
The main key to say this is an advantage that people work or study at home can save the time and the money, because they don't spend a lot of time going the office or school also didn't pay money to buy breakfast or tickets in case they go by public transportation.For instance, normally, you will wake up at 5:30 even earlier to go to your firm , if your comapany located far from your accommodation. However, when you doing at home, you not only don't need wake up too early but also can prepare a breakfast. In addition, when you study or work in your home, it means you can easily connect with different forum, grid or professional that relevant with your job. Moreover, you can address the problems easily, based on the functional technology devices. For instance, when you get trouble with doing homework or accomplish their task in the office, you can easily to search for solution on network from variety sources.
On the other hand, the pros of working and learning from home, sometimes people got the tough like the specific jobs is inappropriate and lack of the devices to do that. For instance, with person who don't have enough money to buy laptop, obviously they can't do at home. Similarly with individual whose major is aesthetic field like modle, actor or single, they absoulutely don't like working at home.
In conclusion, adults and children doing from home have benefit, beside that others face some disadvantages, it depends on different features of their work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72786885246 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60412203601 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577049180328 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.7806948544 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.090909091 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7272727273 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30948593461 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119167133151 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392823846639 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18545882279 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028981971052 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.