Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think
that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The question of whether or not artists should require total freedom in order to boost their creativity has been a matter of debate since the beginning of the twenty-first century. While freedom can bring some benefits to artist in their work, i personally believe that some restrictions are needed in order to avoid any unpleasant situations.
There are reasons why freedom is required for artists to produce art pieces. First, without restriction, artists, especially who revealing political or social meaning through their art-work, may catch the society’s attention. This means, by showing the social issues through their art work, people can raise awareness towards the problem and can bring justice to everyone. For example, the Hope replayed a rape case of a 6-year-old girl in Korean, which highlighted the importance of protecting the young one. Second, by having enough freedom, artists can produce masterpieces, which require creativity and unlimited sources of ideas and that can positively affect the world.
On the other hand, it is widely believed that art has a significant impact on the society so there must be some restrictions needed in order to avoid any negative influences. First, art pieces that contain discrimination content like: gender, ethnic minority, religious, may result in conflict among the society and other bad consequences. For instance, the ‘Man’s power’ that depicts and supports the idea of letting man rules the world disregard for the role of woman in the society. Secondly, if violence is represented through art, it can cause distortion among children and that it can cause some adverse effects on their behaviour. Thus, limitations are required to avoid any harmful effect on the society.
To conclude, although some freedom is necessary for artists to produce such masterpieces, I believe that art should be control in case that it can have some negative influences on the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
The question of whether or not artists should require total fre...
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Suggestion:
... raise awareness towards the problem and can bring justice to everyone. For examp...
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Message: Did you mean 'controlled'?
Suggestion: controlled
...terpieces, I believe that art should be control in case that it can have some negative ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32899022801 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81227304325 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557003257329 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1268084247 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.846153846 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234053451048 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890067092626 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803446763109 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170770687109 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829324966004 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.