The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is suggested that people's average level of health and wellbeing may became worse in the future compared to today. Personally, I completely disagree with this statement.
With the development in science and medicine sector, people with disease are more likely to be treated. Specifically, scientists and many health professionals have been researching and developing treatments and vaccinations which can cured or prevent untreatable disease. For example, while the smallpox is considered as one of the most horrible infectious disease in the past, it is now no longer threatening to us since most children will receive free immunisations. Therefore, some disease are likely to be cured or be prevented in the future.
Moreover, people from underdeveloped regions will improve their health status in the future with the help of educational sanitary programs. While considerable of population in some developing countries are below the average health standard due to unsanitary lifestyles and lacking education, there are non-for-profit organisations such as the Red Cross and the United Nations have been operating international development programs in order to improve the overall environment and impart sanitary knowledge to these vulnerable groups. For instance, an organisation called PLAN has a program that teach children in Africa how to properly wash their hands and identify edible water and food, thereby prevent them exposing to bacteria.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that the contributions of scientists, health professionals and support from international development programs will benefit our health and wellbeing in the long term. Therefore, I strongly believe that the people will have a higher standard of health in the future.
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- The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 78
- The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 70
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65283018868 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1620389887 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.2197669047 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.181818182 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230036451503 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998985544752 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709534225801 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151403000311 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708483179119 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.