The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
In 1995 60% of people born outside of Australia lived in cities, 40% lived in rural areas while only about 10% lived in towns. For people born in Australia, however, city-live was not as common. Only 50% of them lived in cities, while the percentage of people living in smaller towns was higher at 20%. People born in Australia were less likely to live in rural areas than people born in other parts of the world.
By 2010 the situation had clearly changed both for people born in Australia and in the rest of the world. The number of people living in cities had sky-rocketed. For people born in Australia it increased to a little over 60% and for people with origins outside of Australia to 80%. At the same time living in smaler towns and rural areas became less common. About 10% of people of both groups lived in towns. The difference between people born in Australia and elsewhere becomes clear, however, when you look at the number of people living in rural areas. Approximately 15% of people with Australian roots, still live in rural areas. Meanwhile, for people with origins outside of Australia this number has dropped to less than 10%. This is an interesting change to 1995, when people born outside of Australia were more likely to live in rural areas, than people with origins in Australia.
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- Many parents today organise extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends Do you feel that this is a worthwhile thing to do or do you feel children have enough education at school 73
- Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies factories and their employees to the countryside Do you agree or disagree 73
- Cohabitation is believed to bring huge advantages for young people since it enables them to fully understand each other before deciding to get married Do you agree or disagree with this opinion 73
- Nowadays mobile phones and internet have become increasingly important in people s social life What are the advantages and disadvantages of this 56
- Nowadays a large amount of advertising aimed at children should be banned because of the negative effects To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68260869565 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31744024746 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.421739130435 0.561755894193 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 327.6 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9040721928 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8461538462 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391657355201 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180333311909 0.084324248473 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089236955917 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.349503240904 0.151304729494 231% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00582240813326 0.056905535591 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.