Some people believe that governments should pay full course fees for students who want to study in universities. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Many people think that governments should pay university fees for teenagers who want to study in universities. Overall, this view have a plenty of benefit for student that i can agree but it also have some drawback with each person and each stiuation. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
At first, governments will give the chance and opportunity for poor students who do not have enough economy can study in university. following a dream of each children who have energy, spirit and brave enough to improve themselve and change their life. Furthermore, professional tutor in university can train more undergrad to serve the demand of individuals and social and also each youngs generation need to have their own awareness to concentrate in learning for impoving themselves to contribute their ability for the development of country. For instance, in covid 19 pandemic time, docter and nurse were always lose the staff for supporing victims in the hospital, so government need to train more undergrad to serve their nation. In additional, this trend will help the social reduce the amount of evils like drugs,
prostitution and game addiction.
However, these have been a development country to can have enough financial to pay full course fees for students who want to study in universities. In some poor nation, government need to concentrate in the other fields that is more significant for improving their country and the individuals's life. Moreover, some teenagers will not pay attention in their learning because they do not have pay any fees for studing in universities. For example, few bad students will make a terrible environment and horrible influence to majority good teenagers.
To conclude, governments should pay full course fees for students who want to study in universities if they have enough financial, so government need to have bright choice to help their youngs generation impoving themselves for having better future and contributing their ability for the nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24458204334 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84664442557 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495356037152 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.9748024341 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.307692308 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8461538462 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364832773979 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145003525893 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110516238621 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220257013159 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137718581225 0.056905535591 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.