Reporting of crimes and other kinds of violent news on television and in newspapers can have adverse consquences. This kind of information should be restricted from being shown in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people think that reporting of crimes and other kinds of violent informations on television and in the press can have nagative influence. This kind of news should be reduced from being shown in the media. I mostly agree with this notion since it also have some drawbacks to the individuals. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail
At first, the information about crimes and other kinds of violent will be worried and payed attention by almost individuals around their nation. this trend will lead citizen more confused, fear and terrible influence about their mentality. Many of them will scrace and they do not dare to go on the road, especially with teenagers who do not enough knowledge to distinguish right from wrong. For instance, when some children watch this kind of movie and copy the crimes action, this is really dangerous for individuals and the nation. Furthermore, there are a plenty of tabloid
take advantage frome the worry of people by the fake news, exaggeration about the risk of crimes problem to make their own profit. In addition, many crimes depend on internet or television to be more convinience for doing the guilty.
However, with adult and parents need to know that information which relevant to crimes and other kinds of violent news to have enough knowledge for saving their family and their children. For example, father or mother need to teach their children the basic skills the survival such as do not open the or and do not follow people they did not know. Moreover, that crime should be punished by the social and government have to reduce it as early as they cought
To conclude, i mostly agree with the statement that reporting of crimes and other kinds of violent news on television and in newspapers can have adverse consquences, this kind of information should be restricted from being shown in the media by my reason and arguemen, but adult and youngs generation need to have enough knowledge to protect their family and improve their country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, moreover, really, so, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51944903291 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495601173021 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.053595092 49.4020404114 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.5 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4166666667 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.506008973534 0.244688304435 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192594041903 0.084324248473 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156276119874 0.0667982634062 234% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.317842077574 0.151304729494 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.178699799345 0.056905535591 314% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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