Because of the busy pace of Morden life ,many children spend most of their time Indores and have little exposure to natural world .how important is it for children to learn to understand and appreciate nature
In today's fast-paced world, education has became incredible part of every person's life. pupils of few nations are living far from the family for their higher education. In my opinion this trend brings myriad of benefits such as learning new Skills Culture as well as exposure of new culture Compared to the few drawbacks it might bring.
To commence with the first and foremost benefit of Studying away from home is that individual are able to learn new skills related to living life. To explain further, if learner’s live at distance from the abode, they will discover new Skills like Cooking ,time and money management, cleaning and how to manage things. Moreover, they are neither explore new culture nor make new friends not only from another nations but also from another culture Unless they Stay away from home. Additionally, learners are able to enhancing their academic focus because they are all time Surrounded with pupils which Create focused environment. Therfore, Students are able to score good in their tertiary education which Strengthen their resume .
However, what are the demerits of this trend? The most Salient that Student's need higher fincial budget for fulfillment of daily need Such as for food, living expenses and So on. Another worth considering demits associated with this is Pupils feel either emotional breakdown or home sickness. since living apart from their family and in some Situation they felt sad because of burden of managing all thing alone.
To Sum up. Despite, purpil felt homesickness and and required higher budget,I deem that they not only buit necessary Skill to live life but also enhance their future through getting good job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, apart from, as for, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15328467153 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3914448069 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616788321168 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6468427148 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.857142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110636211114 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397723209629 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285720514061 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685963162042 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223346051365 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.