Young people who commit crimes should be treated in the same as adults who commit crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Accelerating crime rates have become pensive concern for Society. Advocates believes there ought to be equal punishment for juveniles who Commit offence. This essay supports the assertion to a major extent despite Some inhibitions.
Admittedly, one Of the prime reasons behind this grave Concean Could be fairness in justice. This means, offenders are treating equally regardless of their age, which promotes fairness in justice and avoid biasness that might arise from leniency toward young offenders.To Vindicate, an article published in `The Times' . indicate that, in USA 75% of crimes committed by children rather than adult in 2019 due to the different punishment between young and old offenders. Thus, if government implement the punishment rule, this issue can effectively alleviated. probing further, it also provides society safety as Sometimes Juvenile attempt serious Crime like murders and rapes which has adversely impact on other children of society and individuals,which creates problems for society.
Despite faianess and public safety, its downside must not be overlooked. At the young age, they are not mature enough to understand what is wrong and right due to that they commit crime with the influence of other peers. Since if they are put in prison like criminal adults, this record would make it difficult to find any job in future and they will get involved in crime again. Therefore, it is necessary to have different punishments.
In conclusion, although the same punishment for younger and adult create few problems, I believe that it not only provides public safety but also promotes fairness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43307086614 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74760669685 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685039370079 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5764916576 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.153846154 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218304245772 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657081202935 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600416310569 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118981869414 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457058116655 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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