Because of the progress in medicine, people are living longer now. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
he author claims that due to the advancements in medicine field, the life span of people has increased. I completely agree with the author in this standpoint but I also believe that advantages do not outweigh the disadvantages.
The medicine field has seen enormous progress in the recent past with new medicines being discovered every minute. In my opinion, the progress of any nation can be judged by its advancements in the field of science and medicine. An example to notice is the medicine for cancer which was considered impossible fifty to sixty years ago but now more advanced medicines have been discovered which can tackle different variants of the cancer causing cells. this progress has definitely improved lives of lot of people. people are now confident that any ailment can be cured owing to the fact that a lot scientists bring breakthroughs in the field of medicine. More youngsters want to pursue this field due to the laurels it can bring for the scientific community.
However, considering this progress in medicine, it feels dangerous due to the lot of incidents that has happened. To cite an example, a lot of scientists spend majority of their time analyzing different chemicals and their reaction with one another. In this process, a lot of new drugs have been discovered which have proven to be detrimental to the health of people especially youngsters. due to some lot of scientists in greed for money, sell these medicines to multi-national corporations which eventually take its place in the market and the results were fatal too. Furthermore, since the life span of people have increased, and considering the fact that the birth rate is still high, more people now compete for a limited number of resources which has led to a lot of different crisis in different countries. An example would be for the case of India, which has recently overtook China in being the most populous country in the world, where the birth rate is ever increasing and with more and more medicines being discovered, there is a never ending fight for resources in the country.
In conclusion, even though there are a lot of pros to the advancements in the medicine, but it is also a double-edged sword with the cons outweighing the advantages which can be fatal to life too.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
he author claims that due to the advanceme...
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Line 1, column 4, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'authors'.
Suggestion: authors
he author claims that due to the advancements in ...
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Line 3, column 453, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...t variants of the cancer causing cells. this progress has definitely improved lives ...
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Line 3, column 515, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...nitely improved lives of lot of people. people are now confident that any ailment can ...
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Line 5, column 391, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Due
...health of people especially youngsters. due to some lot of scientists in greed for ...
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Line 5, column 877, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'overtaken'.
Suggestion: overtaken
...r the case of India, which has recently overtook China in being the most populous countr...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90956072351 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82810369611 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470284237726 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.8546070383 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.666666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18611145081 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759790963912 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509758173752 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127792361256 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534145982282 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
he author claims that due to the advanceme...
^^
Line 1, column 4, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'authors'.
Suggestion: authors
he author claims that due to the advancements in ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 453, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...t variants of the cancer causing cells. this progress has definitely improved lives ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 515, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...nitely improved lives of lot of people. people are now confident that any ailment can ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 391, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Due
...health of people especially youngsters. due to some lot of scientists in greed for ...
^^^
Line 5, column 877, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'overtaken'.
Suggestion: overtaken
...r the case of India, which has recently overtook China in being the most populous countr...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90956072351 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82810369611 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470284237726 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.8546070383 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.666666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18611145081 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759790963912 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509758173752 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127792361256 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534145982282 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.