Being a celebrity, such as a famous film star or sports personality, brings problems as well as benefits. Do the advantages of being a celebrity outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, being a figure like a movie star can cause some issues as well as providing prosperities. While being a figure can be positive in some ways, I believe the disadvantages have outweighted the advantages.
On the one hand, living as a big name can bring about some benefits. Firstly, celebrites get special treatment wherever and whenever they go. From special seats at theaters to special tables at restaurants, celebrities earned the benefits of being the preferred customers everywhere they go. For instance, if Selena Gomez went into a restaurant, she might get special treatments such as fancy table and scrumptious food. Secondly, many opportunities arise when people become famous. More opportunities arise in life when people are famous, whether they are career related or not. For example, someone like Kevin Hart who made a living not only from his acting but he was also a famous comedian. In contrast, you might not come across life-changing opportunities if you are not famous.
On the other hand, there are some issues associated with being a celebrity. The first disadvantage is that celebrities have no privacy. Lack of privacy is probably one of the biggest disadvantages of being a celebrity. Everything that a celebrity does will be recorded and spread widely on the Internet. For example, if Arnold Schwarzenegger have an arugment or fight in a nightclub, pictures of him are going to be splashed in the tabloids. The second disadvantage is being famous can attract stalkers. Famous people are often followed or harraseed by mail by fans or followers who cross the line and become obsessed. This obession can be harmful and can turn into threats.
In conclusion, being a big name can provides some benefits such as special treatments or life-changing opportunities. However, judging on the disadvantages that a celebrity might encounter, I believe that the disadvantages have outweighted the advantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
...s. In conclusion, being a big name can provides some benefits such as special treatment...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22508038585 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09736942189 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553054662379 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4612016612 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.25 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.55 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290576853413 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089325213935 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593153375942 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190425004439 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052181276166 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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