Being a celebrity, such as famous film star or sports personality, brings problems as well as benefits. What are the problems of being famous? Do you think being famous is good or bad?
In contemporary society, it is believed that there are a number of problems as well as advantages when people become famous by different ways, such as being a well-known movie star or sports athlete. Although there are undoubtedly some problems of being a celebrity, I hold a firm belief that its benefits outweigh the drawbacks.
Several issues can be anticipated when individuals receive a great amount of fame. The main problem of becoming famous is that one’s privacy can be seriously violated. It can be commonly found that a celebrity is often followed by fans as well as the media. Hence, their personal life can be interrupted as these followers will do their best to extract every piece of information of celebrities’ life under various forms, such as taking photos or spreading misleading news. Apart from that, famous sports athletes may have to deal with the pressure coming from the public. If they underperform in a match or a competition, huge waves of criticism coming from the press and the fans will be published, aiming at these sports persons.
In addition to the abovementioned issues, high reputation certainly brings some positive effects to famous individuals. The first upside is that these celebrities are able to make a fortune since a lot of businesses in the modern era desire to promote their products by having famous actors or athletes endorsing their brand. Thus, this will give these popular individuals a chance to earn more income for their living. Moreover, gaining more reputation also helps improve one’s status in society. This can be explained by the fact that celebrities certainly have a number of followers. Therefore, by constantly contributing positivity, such as funding charities, to the community, these famous people can gain people’s trust, which can be powerful support if they make a decision to pursue their political career.
Taking everything into consideration, this reinforces my perspective that despite the fact that being famous can be somehow problematic, it brings more beneficial influences to ones.
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... profits will be submitted to taxation. Despite the aforementioned advantages, t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, hence, if, so, still, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78861788618 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03222379729 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630081300813 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7180414625 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.714285714 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203050053732 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078267134657 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606572548699 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130760932763 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185645885903 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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