BENEFITS OF HAVING A PART TIME JOB FOR STUDENTS

Essay topics:

BENEFITS OF HAVING A PART-TIME JOB FOR STUDENTS

It is true that nowadays, more and more student choosing to have a part-time job. benefit for that vary, I believe that student should have their own job after school-time.

Initial benefit of having part-time job is that student can stand a higher chance to have a good paid job. experience in job, for example, is the knowledge that student accumulated when having a part-time job. Almost all companies need a seasoned employee because they need less training time and have essential skills. Productivity of seasoned employees are more effective, therefore, usually have a faster opportunity in promotion and a higher salary. having part-time job helps student have more confidence and skills when they enter a new place.

Moreover, having part-time job helps student give their parents a leg up in financial burden. Many people have no wealthy background, therefore, part-time job is a good choice to reduce financial burden for family. Some students have part-time job for educating and financial purposes. having part-time job does not make student have less time to study or put more pressure on student, the fact is that having part-time job create a chance for student to helping their parents and boosting their solving problem ability.

In conclusion, part-time jobs create more chances for student in both present and future. they help student stand a higher in having good paid job and reduce financial burden for their parents. In my opinion, student should have part-time jobs to have more experience.

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Benefit
...udent choosing to have a part-time job. benefit for that vary, I believe that student s...
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Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Experience
... higher chance to have a good paid job. experience in job, for example, is the knowledge t...
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Line 3, column 455, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Having
...unity in promotion and a higher salary. having part-time job helps student have more c...
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Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
...or family. Some students have part-time job for educating and financial purposes. h...
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Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Having
...b for educating and financial purposes. having part-time job does not make student hav...
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Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...for student in both present and future. they help student stand a higher in having g...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19918699187 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61129111709 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479674796748 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8283112574 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3571428571 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.753697607903 0.244688304435 308% => The coherence between essay topic and essay body is overfitting.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.389770740604 0.084324248473 462% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16063235146 0.0667982634062 240% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.603147995238 0.151304729494 399% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263258238554 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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