Some people believe that giving longer prison sentences is the best way to reduce crime. Others believe that there are better ways to reduce crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion
In the last few year, the rate of the crime on the world is increasing sharply that make a debate about the way to reduce crime. Some people belive that giving longer prisonsentences is the best way to reduce the crime but others think that there are more way to reduce it.
I do not agree with the view one because it has some negative side. Firstly, the rent which government must pay for security is too much. If government wants prison to keep in captivity, they will must pay too much for building more stockade, prison management. The more longer prison sentences the more rent must pay. Secondly, longer prison sentences lead to prison is stressed in pressure which is the reason why long prison sentences aspire to escape. Prison is a human like us but their life is not lucky which make they go to the dark road. They know how they fail, they want to begin again but longer prison sentences prevent them. One should not hit a man when he is down.
There is no doubt that the development of society depend on educate human. Longer prison just keep in capivity their body but can not solve the increasing of crime, education can do it. People who is sinful still punished and government have educated methods help them repents.
With my opinion, longer prison is not a good way to reduce the crime. Every single day, the development of society will improve living standard of human.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun year seems to be countable; consider using: 'few years'.
Suggestion: few years
In the last few year, the rate of the crime on the world is ...
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Line 2, column 266, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'longer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: longer
...g more stockade, prison management. The more longer prison sentences the more rent must pay...
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Line 2, column 397, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to prison is stressed in pressure which is the reason why long prison sentences...
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Line 2, column 416, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sed in pressure which is the reason why long prison sentences aspire to escape. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.572 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27501560434 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8770815174 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332760223747 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108642117808 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143589676246 0.0667982634062 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221679603525 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154962241962 0.056905535591 272% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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