Benefits of learning a new language
Foreign language is one of the mandatory subjects in our educational systems because it has the ability to advance the career path. Furthermore, knowing another language enables to both strengthen the decision-making process and build close relationships with other people regardless of different cultures.
The first benefit is that being bilingual offers a chance to improve the decision-making process.Apart from the vocabulary and grammar that associate with learning a foreign language,there are gestures that a linguist regularly judges for hidden meanings. For example, Americans are likely to show approval of something by using the thumbs up .When we understand native body languages , our decision-making abilities are built up. Therefore, in order to make a better choice , we should spend more time on studying the second language.
In addition, knowing a novel language can narrow the gap between people without removing geographical barriers. For instance , it is prevalent to see that several people from different nations gather together at a colossal stadium to enjoy an international concert performed by well-known singers such as Selena Gomez, Justin Beiber.
In these cases, absorbing another language is possible for bringing audiences closer since it creates an opportunity for them to communicate with each other like expressing their own views about the concert , sharing their interests,… . By doing this, they are able to figure out their respective opinions and become mutual friends rapidly.Language’power of connecting people from different countries is undeniable.
In conclusion, exposure to a new language can bring numerous advantages such as the improvement in making a decision.Moreover, the more people have contact with other types of linguistics, the more intimate friendships that they are involved .We should endeavor to study a new language so as to form well-prepared future and become more confident.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7147766323 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35939089915 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649484536082 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.5949006657 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.3 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.06120827912 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211236324325 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664220734776 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479749122548 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978434015028 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435975338835 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.12 50.2224549098 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.43 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.