Beside a lot of advantages, some people believe that the Internet creates many problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, the Internet is generally believed that it has become popular with a significant level. Some people admit that the internet gives us a lot of benefits while many others argue that its drawbacks should not be forgotten. The reason for the argument that is people from different backgrounds and generations. For me, I agree with this statement, although Internet has brought many benefits to the field of communication, its wide use inevitably has been associated with negative impacts on social interaction.
To start with, the Internet provides us great convenience and efficiency. First, we can work with a colleague from all parts of the world. In the past days, if we sent a letter or someone sent you, it could take days and sometimes even months to a reach letter at the destination. In modern times, we can send a letter or important information to anyone in the e-mail all over the world through the Internet. And, it often will be delivered to the destination in less than a minute.Email and social networking such as Facebook, Twitter to name a few have created online communities which are global in scale and they have fostered the communication between people and countries . The Internet functions as a global information platform where we can freely share ideologies and cultures.Futhermore, we can share your ideas or views with anyone by making an online video call through applications like skype, line, etc. The Internet allows people to learn information about any topic and offers an answer to any type of question, as it contains endless knowledge and information. On the one hand, internet is a type of entertainment that people use to enrich their moral life. We can listen to music, play games, and watch film without going outside. We can also watch videos about any topic on sites like YouTube, which contain millions of videos of several topics.
In contrast , for all its advantages and positive aspects, the internet has its dark and ugly side too. People, especially young generation spend a considerable amount of time online, chatting and on forums. The Internet can be used to entertain, but it can easily lead to psychological problems if the users overuse its. If people spend most of their leisure time online and not mixing with their neighbourhoods, this would not only have negative effects on local communities, but also would lead to feeling of isolation for the individuals who do not have a real person to turn to in times of need. For example, an internet-addicted person tends to be isolated, self-centered and unsociable. The medical experts proved that an internet-addicted person has a rate of getting depression higher than other people. Moreover, In this day, it is possible to carry out financially activity on the Internet. That created an opportunity for financial crimes. For example, money laundering and fraud in transactions were made via the internet.
In conclusion, I think the advantages and disadvantages are equal. Thus, it is crucial that we maintain a balance between our online life and our contact with real human beings. The youth should learn to balance reality and virtual space. The authorized parties should do something to keep people out of the negative effects of the internet. We control the Internet and not be controlled.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put between 'will' and 'be'.
Suggestion: will often be
...the world through the Internet. And, it often will be delivered to the destination in less th...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Email
...o the destination in less than a minute.Email and social networking such as Facebook,...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...mmunication between people and countries . The Internet functions as a global info...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Futhermore
...an freely share ideologies and cultures.Futhermore, we can share your ideas or views with ...
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... is a type of entertainment that people use to enrich their moral life. We can list...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ideos of several topics. In contrast , for all its advantages and positive asp...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sion higher than other people. Moreover, In this day, it is possible to carry out...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 41.998997996 176% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2781.0 1615.20841683 172% => OK
No of words: 544.0 315.596192385 172% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11213235294 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82947280553 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02636655484 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 294.0 176.041082164 167% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540441176471 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 873.0 506.74238477 172% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.838387788 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3214285714 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238380838337 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581068086695 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459967423858 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149867585654 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705461888132 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 78.4519038076 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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