Besides a lot of advantages, some people believe that the internet creates many problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement.
Although some people believe that Internet is a boon to the human race, some criticize as it creates difficulties. Personally, I completely agree that Internet causes many problems.
Internet changed the way we connect to the world. Through technological innovation, now we can communicate and exchange information in a matter of seconds. But still, people who tend to be online, for long hours, get addicted to that. The near and dear ones may not feel their presence, lacking human interaction. Some people tend to reveal so much of their personal information on social networking sites. For example, when a mother shares his family pictures on her Facebook wall and being shared by her family members, it may land on the hands of child kidnappers.
As internet is considered as the ocean of knowledge and resources, it allows a student to access to a limitless amount of capital. Nevertheless, it also distracts him/her. Moreover, a great amount of offensive, obscene content and video clips on the internet may divert their attention to a wrong end.
Banking and shopping have been made convenient by the usage of internet. Indeed, we are supposed to share our wealthy personal information with them. Personally, it makes me uncomfortable when I need to answer the security questions like “Your first telephone number, The name of your first pet”, while filling the online registration forms.
In conclusion, given the benefit of doubt, though internet has a lot of benefits, it also has some negative aspects which should be handled by governmental rules and regulatory authorities, and also by parental guidance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23954372624 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95118765837 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650190114068 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.0590072585 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176416869143 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573026610076 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739414298951 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108706762872 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114884260246 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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