The diagram below shows how coffee beans are processed.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This diagram explains the detailed making process of coffee from coffee beans. It takes several steps to go from fresh harvested coffee beans to a delicious cup of coffee.
To begin with, fresh, good, and even sized coffee beans are hand-picked. Secondly, to remove the outer cover of those beans, they all are put into a depulper. After then, they are soaked in water and stored for one to three days for fermentation in tanks. Next, the fermented coffee beans must be sun dried on fields to remove the moisture, before carefully sorting them using sorters.
Further, they are roasted by heat and ground coarsely into coffee powder. Finally, the coffee powder is packed neatly and labelled for distribution. Those packets are loaded and transported by trucks to the grocery shops, where people can buy, mix with hot or cold water, or add it to the coffee machine and enjoy their favoured drink.
- The diagram below shows City Park before and after a swimming pool was constructed.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion on this? Do you think this is a good or bad change? 80
- 'Schools should prepare students fro university,rather than for work.' How for do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experiences or observations. 85
- Whether studying films in schools is as important as studying literature? 88
- The time people devote in job leaves very little time for personal life. How widespread is the problem?. What the problem this shortage of time cause? 88
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... carefully sorting them using sorters. Further, they are roasted by heat and gr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, second, secondly, so, then, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 751.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90849673203 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31820768907 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.699346405229 0.547539520022 128% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.260932111 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4444444444 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142818552851 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596535950012 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482213337882 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100891786394 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418414140361 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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