This is the best tie to live due to the development of technology in communication and health. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
In the contemporary world, the advances in technology have brought a major improvement in humans’ living standards. This could be seen in a paradigm shift in the way people communicate and take care of their well-being. This essay will support this argument by analyzing how technology supports humans’ lives on a daily basis.
In regard to human communication, technology has played an integral part in our daily lives. First, by using technological devices such as mobile phones and tablets, people, especially elders, are now able to keep in touch with their family members regardless of geographical distance. In fact, before the invention of such smart devices, delivering and receiving a message required physical travel, costing unnecessary money, effort and time. Second, the internet has offered effective and efficient ways to communicate with others. Social networking sites, for example, have become an internet platform where users are able to instantly reach international friends and even professional connections, which promotes better social behaviors and strengthens social connections.
Concerning the healthcare sphere, the impacts that robotic technology has had on our daily lives have clear advantages. First, robots can now assist surgeons since they can perform tasks requiring pinpoint accuracy. The media, for instance, has revealed many successful fetal surgeries with robotic equipment removing brain tumor with great precision, which proves how advanced modern technology has become. Second, it is hard to imagine how people now are able to monitor their health status through wearable devices such as the Apple watch or Misfit health trackers. Not only do the devices say people from expensive medical procedures, but they provide more data to clinicians with the potential for earlier diagnoses and guidance for treatment.
In conclusion, decades of technological development, humans have received a myriad of its merits from communication to healthcare services, raising the quality of their lives. Even thought there will still be many hurdles in the future, I am firmly convinced that humankind can keep advancing and find a way to combat any problems encountered from modern technology.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, still, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6528189911 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92112950089 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646884272997 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2720173568 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170195070275 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560152382803 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480210454815 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100762762839 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640687869156 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.82 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.