The best way to ensure the growth of children is to make parents take parenting courses.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is obvious that for some recent decades, the parental skills have been considered to play an essential role in the development of children .While I hold the belief participating in classes about upbringing children is an effective method , I also suppose some alternatives should be taken into account to better situation.
It is the case that undertaking a parenting class can help parenthoods to practise more and be shared more about child-rearing.Obviously, here they will receive a variety of helpful profession advices from psychological experts.In addition, they have a chance to debate this subject of interest with other one. they not only perceive new useful approach of experienced parents,but also learned by experiencing the consequences of making mistakes of others.
Besides,in my view,referencing to available sourse of information and tips how to improve their parental characters is as appropriate as enrolling in the courses.There is currently a multitute of books and academic documents which contains research of numerous well-known psychologists all over the world in the domain.Moreover, both mothers and fathers had better get closer to their children actively.As a result,it is able to promote parents-child relationship positively so as to penetrate their offspring absolutely.
To conclusion,although the courses providea host of benificial outcomes for both parents and children.I believed it should be up to the parents to make a decision whether or not they wish to take part in such courses
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, well, while, as to, in addition, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2024.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 8.8 5.12529762239 172% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 9.01176017034 2.80592935109 321% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678260869565 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.4 1.60771543086 149% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 195.608384278 49.4020404114 396% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 404.8 106.682146367 379% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.0 20.7667163134 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.8 7.06120827912 266% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.050671126632 0.244688304435 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547783966399 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522119875654 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0518207239084 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494231861226 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 43.0 13.0946893788 328% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -42.89 50.2224549098 -85% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 21.2 7.44779559118 285% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.7 11.3001002004 272% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 34.65 12.4159519038 279% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.1 8.58950901804 141% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 38.0 9.78957915832 388% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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