The best way to reduce the number of traffic accidents is to raise age limit for the younger drivers and to lower age limit for the aged ones. Do you agree?
Car Accidents have been one of the most important causes of death and personal disability. Nowadays, due to it's exponential growing up pattern, it makes headache in almost all countries whether in developed or developing areas. We can say that age of people whom are licensed to be drivers has great affection in this problem.
Generally speaking, young people -specially teenagers- in a lot of situations have furious and reckless acts. They also have very labile moods most of the time. Thus this may affect their attitude in dealing with their cars on the road. Moreover, most of them tend to use alcohol and illicit drugs while they are driving, which usually adversely influence their ability to concentrate in their way. On the other hand, older drivers suffer from their naturally occurring deterioration in the majority of essential body functions, For instance, the sense of vision, hearing and even their cognition. This also delays their reaction in emergency situations that may happen in the streets, for example, unexpected child or animal crossing the road wrongly.
So, decreasing the gap between both globally well known extremes of age for driving can definitely prevent some horrible accidents. But this can never be considered as a radical solution for this issue. It is just a tiny item in a long exhaustive list of causes. In particular, sometimes traffic signs can be not so clear for all guys. In addition, the drivers who usually drive for long journeys without having time to rest may fall asleep while driving and make very dangerous mess in highways. this results in catastrophic disasters.
We can conclude that implementing strict rules for driving ages can partially participate in solving this difficult dilemma. But by it self can not halt road traffic accidents.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in particular', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230769230769 0.247107183377 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.144615384615 0.155533422707 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0830769230769 0.0946595960268 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0861538461538 0.0501214627716 172% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0523076923077 0.0437548338989 120% => OK
Prepositions: 0.135384615385 0.122226691241 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0553846153846 0.0403226058552 137% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68843502988 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0153846153846 0.0326793684256 47% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00307692307692 0.00163938923432 188% => OK
Determiners: 0.08 0.0861772015684 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0307692307692 0.021408717616 144% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0123076923077 0.011925033212 103% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1802.0 1933.35771543 93% => OK
No of words: 294.0 316.048096192 93% => OK
Chars per words: 6.12925170068 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.363945578231 0.374742101984 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.312925170068 0.28420135186 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.224489795918 0.203846283523 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.15306122449 0.137316102897 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68843502988 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.037074148 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65306122449 0.56093040696 116% => OK
Word variations: 78.6213581062 60.7387585426 129% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.2941176471 20.7743622355 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4534249626 49.517814964 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 127.492653851 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2941176471 20.7743622355 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.823529411765 0.814263465372 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 48.5866346539 49.1944974215 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.48913043478 1.69124875643 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289604193391 0.332605444948 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0681241981639 0.102741220458 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0467537418159 0.0668466124924 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.475604423729 0.534860350844 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.114637011121 0.148594505496 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097855052845 0.134430193775 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664916142173 0.0742795772207 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.272892213092 0.324371583561 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00301464814928 0.0638462369009 5% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175469896554 0.228012699653 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766919473394 0.058150111329 132% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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