The best way to reduce poverty in developing countries is by giving up to six years of free education, so that they can at least read, write and use numbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is agrue that the most appropriate method to decrease poverty in developing countries is by giving numerous years of free education, so that they can at least read, write and caculate. From my point of view, i mostly agree with this notion because of its benefits for the individuals life. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
At first, education is hugely significant for the development of the nation and social. Not only does it improve people mantallity, providing academic knowledge and interested information, but also the government will created a healthy enviroment for the citizens, avoiding evil social such as additted to games or drugs. Furthermore, the unemployment problem can be reduced graduately by education which transmit the value required skills for people. To illustrate, there was a statistic by Yornathan, showing that the percentage of homeless people in Ganna which is developping nation had reduced significantly by the investing in education.
However, there are various occupation and fields which the state of developing nation should be concentrate for inproving the individuals life such as medical, entertainment or science research. Moreover, six years are quite long time with the normal people who just train basic course that is not really neccessary and waste a plenty revenue of the government.
To conclude, by my agrument from these essay t totally agree with this staement, but it still have some nagative aspect to the individuals and their country. The state need to have bright plan to develop their nation better than before.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 277, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... notion because of its benefits for the individuals life. The following essay will analyse ...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will analyse this statement in detail. At first, education is hugely significan...
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Line 2, column 220, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'create'
Suggestion: create
...formation, but also the government will created a healthy enviroment for the citizens, ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...icantly by the investing in education. However, there are various occupation an...
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Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'concentrated'?
Suggestion: concentrated
...he state of developing nation should be concentrate for inproving the individuals life such...
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Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...should be concentrate for inproving the individuals life such as medical, entertainment or ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e a plenty revenue of the government. To conclude, by my agrument from these e...
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Line 4, column 97, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
... agree with this staement, but it still have some nagative aspect to the individuals...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, still, at least, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3031496063 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86792851201 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645669291339 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9005818825 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.454545455 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192183472742 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697932419074 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102951948146 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105889349786 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856089291249 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 277, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... notion because of its benefits for the individuals life. The following essay will analyse ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will analyse this statement in detail. At first, education is hugely significan...
^^
Line 2, column 220, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'create'
Suggestion: create
...formation, but also the government will created a healthy enviroment for the citizens, ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...icantly by the investing in education. However, there are various occupation an...
^^
Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'concentrated'?
Suggestion: concentrated
...he state of developing nation should be concentrate for inproving the individuals life such...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...should be concentrate for inproving the individuals life such as medical, entertainment or ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e a plenty revenue of the government. To conclude, by my agrument from these e...
^^
Line 4, column 97, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
... agree with this staement, but it still have some nagative aspect to the individuals...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, still, at least, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3031496063 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86792851201 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645669291339 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9005818825 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.454545455 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192183472742 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697932419074 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102951948146 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105889349786 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856089291249 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.