Big salary is much more important than job
satisfaction.
Do you agree or disagree?
Provide relevant examples if necessary. Write
least 250 words.
A high salary is of prime importance in choosing a career, as it will help fulfil the needs and live a luxurious life. However, job satisfaction will lead to the productivity of work and maintain a healthy lifestyle. I admit that I have to disagree that a higher wage is vital than job satisfaction.
"Money is the root cause of all evil." When employers offer a high pay scale, more responsibilities and objectives need to be adjusted. As a result, work pressure is developed because the employee will have to work late during day hours and nights. Thereby, family relations are disrupted, as they will not be able to spend time together. On the other hand, health is affected, due to increased workload and stress, as they will lack physical exercise and relaxation. Bank balance will increase, but there will be no time to spend the money that is earned.
Job satisfaction plays a crucial role in personal life; when people are pleased with their work, they work efficiently and without force. The environment at the workplace becomes very pleasant and achieves their goal with a high success rate since they are in the area of their interest. The relationship with family and colleagues remains good; as a reason, life becomes more accessible and more comfortable.
Some people think, big salary is essential to living in this competitive world, where things are costly. For example, sending their children to a good school requires parents to pay high fees, which can be possible only when income is high. An increase in bank balance will also improve the status in society as people will respect the position owned by individuals. However, I think self-satisfaction is vital to living in this stressful world; when we are satisfied with our work, automatically success, position and money are achieved, and healthy relations are developed.
In conclusion, while money matters a lot, other considerations prove to be equally important. And so far, no research shows that fat wage trumps all other factors in terms of their role in making one happy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99420289855 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86088571718 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579710144928 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5937896786 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.352941176 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2941176471 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0817403986966 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0297821573737 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379954330007 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0517421782449 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543547694542 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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