The birth rate in most developed countries is predicted to begin to fall over the next 50 years. By 2030 it is estimated that over one third of population in most developed countries will be aged 65 at more.
What effects will those prediction have on developed countries. If they prove true?. What can be done to deal with situation.
It is undoubtedly the case that in most developed countries there is drop in birth rate as well as increase in number of senior citizens. Which is also affecting society adversly. In this essay, I will examine the possible phenomenon and suggest some of practical policies that authorities could implement to solve the problem of developed countries.
The first step is to understand why is this happening. Broadly speaking, there are number of effects for this. The first and foremost effect is on the economy of the nation as there is less working population available due to both decrease in birth rate and increase in aged people in the country which will drop the rate of productivity of the product from the developed countries. One of the solution for this problem could be migration, developed countries can migrate students from developing countries until the economy of the nation become stronger. For instance, as Canada is migrating students from countries like India, china and Russia to become more economically stable country.
Moving further, secondly, it causes effect on the youth of the nation as government earn money from the taxes payed by individuals, but due to drop in birth rate as well as incline in number of senior citizens there will be less tax payers in the country so it will cause immense pressure on the shoulders of the young people because they have to pay heavy taxes. Now moving towards the solution, government should revised the law and gave help to old people upto their basic needs would be fulfilled and implement it until ratio become stable.
To conclusion, there are veriety of different effects of this problem. While, it may not be possible to find a complete solution of this, this could probably be solved by government by migration of students from developing countries and by upgrade of law according to need of hour .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... increase in number of senior citizens. Which is also affecting society adversly. In ...
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Line 7, column 281, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...upgrade of law according to need of hour .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, broadly speaking, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96825396825 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63898057488 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511111111111 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.2967361286 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.416666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240825504576 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844480229016 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716119430229 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146941600928 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466490761768 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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