The birth rate in most developed countries is predicted to begin to fall over the next 50 years. By 2030 it is estimated that over one third of the population in most developed countries will be aged 65 and over. What effects will these prediction have on developed countries if they prove true? What can be done now to deal with this situation?
It is undoubtedly the case that is related to decrease in birth rate and increase in the old age population of developed countries which is also affecting the society adversely. In this essay, I will examine the possible reasons for this trend and suggest some of the practical policies that authorities could implement to overcome the problem.
Broadly speaking, there are three main reasons for this trend.This first and foremost effect is on the economy as there will be no working population of the country which will ultimately lead to reduction in the productivity of the developed countries. A possible solution for this trend could be migration of youth from developing countries. This will not only help to balance out the population but also it will help to maintain the productivity of the country. Reduction in birth rate and increament in the over aged people resulted in increase in the burden of government as they have to provide pensions to the old age people. Subsequently, In order to fulfill this condition, the government increases the taxes. Consequently, the burden gets transferred to the working population as they have to pay high taxes. A possible remedy for this could be to revise the policies and maintain a balance in providing pensions and charging taxes.
Thirdly, this trend could have detrimental effects on the defence area as there will be no young population to protect the country from any kind of danger. The developed countries can make use of advanced technology and resources available with them. Even the country can take in intiative in making good relation wit other developed countries. So, that they can help them in difficult times. Military services must be made compulsory in high schools to fulfill their needs.
In conclusion there are variety of factors that have led to make this problem. A complete solution to this could be providing easy visa so that young people can migrate with ease. Proper child planning must be implemented by the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, so, third, thirdly, broadly speaking, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06927710843 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76849505798 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484939759036 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1213061354 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5294117647 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224168841666 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708025107125 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590628312028 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13434624834 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588326688152 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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