The books should not be banned.
Over the arc of history, there was always a period of time, filled with battles over lands and resources, most of the time ended in considerable blood-shed, men slaughtered and people taken as slaves. These are the facts that are denied mostly by the occupant countries that attacked the defend-less lands, yet they will always try to represent themselves as messengers of the gods of all sorts to make people believe in them so that they won't rise rebels opposing them. The books containing the truth about their true nature is more likely to get banned as they contain the truth behind the power and therefore should not be published in the idea of governments. All the books that get published are mainly made by the regime as they have the authority, power and resources to do so, whereas writer with different ideas are sometimes murdered and hanged due to betrayal.
On the other hand there are also lots of books which contain pornography, violent scenes and scientific sexual facts that should be banned as they might transfer a negative signal to children’s minds. These supposedly unimportant books which are accessible in most of supermarkets and stores have been proven to have a vital effect on children behavior in the future. A study showed that a considerable portion of criminals are criminals as a result of exposing to banned resources in their childhood.
As for me, I tend to believe the books should not be comprehensively banned. i.e. particular age ranges should have no access to forbidden books that are not suitable for them. instead, they should be given the proper resources to study from, or play with rather than the facts that might hurt their very clean subconscious, engaging their minds with dirty truths behind their own government ideas, history or what their parents do to make babies, even if it looks perfectly normal from others’ perspectives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... the arc of history, there was always a period of time, filled with battles over lands and res...
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Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the supermarkets') or simply say ''most supermarkets''.
Suggestion: most of the supermarkets; most supermarkets
...important books which are accessible in most of supermarkets and stores have been proven to have a v...
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Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Instead
...n books that are not suitable for them. instead, they should be given the proper resour...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, whereas, as for, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9465408805 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.662110814 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572327044025 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.3022129675 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.3 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313758614365 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139128846904 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125565598441 0.0667982634062 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221913527654 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534125399497 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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