In the past, people store knowledge in the books. Nowadays people store knowledge on the internet. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
It is a fact that people store knowledge on the internet nowadays. This has caused people to think about whether it is beneficial to store intelligence on the internet. This trend would create certain benefits but there will also be some drawbacks.
On the one hand, it is clear that storing knowledge on the internet would bring decent advantages. One evident strength is that it is very convenient. In other words, when people store knowledge on the internet, they can use it at any time anywhere. For example, people who save their documents on Google Drive can open them at any time even if they do not have an internet connection. Another reason is that it would help people to share a pool of information. There are a number of websites or applications where people can share what they know about some problems. This is a great way to broaden people's minds.
On the other hand, there are some obvious disadvantages that would arise. First, privacy is an extreme problem. It means that because it is free for everyone to have access to knowledge, therefore, it can be at a high risk of being stolen. Second, it depends on technology. For example, if someone stores all their stuff on the phone and their phone runs out of batteries or, then all the knowledge is useless.
In conclusion, there are plus points to storing knowledge on the internet regarding convenience and information widespread. However, the downside would emerge consequently in terms of privacy and dependence on technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, regarding, second, so, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.875 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72699898011 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55078125 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3437420077 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4117647059 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0588235294 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58823529412 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382002753239 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121332608099 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124508970135 0.0667982634062 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233608963387 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125912496485 0.056905535591 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.