Both governments and individuals are spending vast amount of money protecting animals and their habitats. This money could be better spent dealing with fundamental issues in sociely such as poverty and health care.
To what extent do you agree?
It goes without saying that many entities have put a mass of effort to tackle environment problem since it is a main threat to our life nowadays. However, there is an argue that instead of focusing on how to secure flora and fauna world, people could re-consider to solve community problems. Although I believe that citizens life is vital for a society to thrive, in my opinion, both eco-system should receive equal consideration as they have related to each others.
In the one hand, wildlife habitats have play a key role to the surviving chance of every creature in this planet, which need serious support from organizations. Since human are belong to Earth’s food chain, every change that happened to others animals also affect us in various ways. In fact, our life rely on nature balance. Bumblebee, for example, would be considered to be the most important insect in North America as their main duty as pollinator. As the population of this creature are now declining rapidly due to the urbanization, which including deforestation process. At a result, the governments have to spend million of dollars for alternative machinery, which is a highly cost for such a simple task that could be done by nature automatically.
In the other hand, the community should receive equal amount of budget as well. Since the government have a responsibility to protect and advance living condition of its citizen, it should distribute more aid package to help low-pay or illness person to finance their accommodations. Our residents could have a proper care and contribute to the success of the economy.
In conclusion, both animal and human eco-system are equal vital. Therefore, it is true that we should find a way to maintain balance for these two factor to improve with better result.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...to our life nowadays. However, there is an argue that instead of focusing on how to secu...
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Line 1, column 317, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
...unity problems. Although I believe that citizens life is vital for a society to thrive, ...
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Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'belonged'.
Suggestion: belonged
...ort from organizations. Since human are belong to Earth's food chain, every chang...
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Line 3, column 627, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...a result, the governments have to spend million of dollars for alternative machinery, w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02348993289 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84906443338 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630872483221 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6487996045 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.928571429 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121907419012 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380994804353 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274133987024 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698093364697 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280812066961 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.