Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
It is irrefutably true that nowadays, for purchasing stuff like home essentials, study material, and ticketing is becoming increasingly common for people to go online rather than going to a shop or a travel agent. In my perspective, the merits outstrip the demerits.
On the bright side, at first, the e-shopping has a positive role to play in the world due to its convenience, cheapness and other multifarious benefits. One of the greatest merits of online shopping is that everything is very easily available over the internet. Many of the e-commerce organizations like Amazon, Flipkart and what not. These companies always provide the best quality products at the cheaper rate. Sometimes they give plenty of discount on some purchases to attract the vast majority of customers, this is a win-win situation for the company and as well as for buyers. Every single material is available and its just one clicks away. Therefore, no more hovering in shopping malls, shops and waiting to pay bills in the queue.
Secondly, apart from its convenience and price, it is absolutely to be pivotal that there are no limitations and conditions. No matter what weather and what time it is, everything is available round the clock. Furthermore, the e-ticketing is also in trend nowadays, the passenger does not need to wait in queues to book their tickets, they can easily book them on the websites online. For example, the airplane ticket can be booked before days of the flight and there is also discount that many companies give to the customers as well. Sometimes, books are not available in the libraries or bookstores then it is a good and very effective idea to dig into the internet and purchase the book that anyone is looking for.
On the other hand, there are some dominant disadvantages, for instance, fraud, online theft, and late shipping delivery. To expand it would be seen that sometimes, there may be a different product that a customer receives than the originally shown on that website that leads to deception and also adding into it product may be damaged or outdated because it is hard to examine unless it reaches the shipping address. Other than that, confidential details like credit card number, online banking number is not sage unless and until the website is not fully secure. Many of the times due to some bad weather or any other reason the shipping might be late for days, but if the thing is bought from the store then it will be into the hands, a customer does not have to wait for any delivery
Wrapping up, given the aforementioned statement, it is quite evident that buying things online has both pros and cons. But, from my point of view, the benefits outplays the drawback.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, as for, for example, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2251.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 462.0 315.596192385 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87229437229 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65425602661 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54329004329 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 714.6 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.1942771279 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.473684211 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3157894737 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78947368421 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0855981560387 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0241385132013 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036269936598 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0495809393378 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290390799153 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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