Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
It is an growing trend that, people relying online shopping to buy books air tickets and food items. However, it is better for huge companies and hectic workers, this would inversely affect local markets and bookstalls.
On the one hand, many business personals and entrepreneurs often approach to the internet to buy their necessities and travel tickets. Such shopes are reliable and deliver their things to the customers door step, and that would be beneficial to the needy and the innovative online shopping centers. Similarly, these shopes offer travel-free, wider selection of items in finger tip, thereby they can consume the time, and could divert to productivly. Additionally, many internet sites exhibits the compatability of price with pellets of shopes. For instance, airline ticket rates are varied in different sites and the peple can choose an appropriate flight cope up with the money and standard.
Nevertheless, it is adversely affect the common people who relied on their minor shopes or offices. Escalating online shopping minimises the customers in nearby shopes, and malls which would alter the finacial level of the community to some extent. Many internet based shopes are inherited with huge companies and corporates who live longer distance or sometimes internationally. Therefore, advantages of money exchange has not a useful to the local finance. Moreover, online transactions often lead to fraudulent effect, damageble products to some extent. For example, misuse of credit or debit card usages, broken products by long travels.
To conclude, it is good to have an online shopes for buying rang of items though, overall outcome of these phenomenon would lead to a detrimental effect not only to the individual but also to the whole society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
It is an growing trend that, people relying onli...
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Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
...eliable and deliver their things to the customers door step, and that would be beneficial...
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Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun internet seems to be countable; consider using: 'many '.
Suggestion: many
...d divert to productivly. Additionally, many internet sites exhibits the compatability of pri...
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Line 5, column 31, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'affected'.
Suggestion: affected
...ndard. Nevertheless, it is adversely affect the common people who relied on their m...
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Line 5, column 251, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun internet seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many '.
Suggestion: Many
...level of the community to some extent. Many internet based shopes are inherited with huge co...
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Line 5, column 471, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... useful to the local finance. Moreover, online transactions often lead to fraudu...
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Line 5, column 574, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le products to some extent. For example, misuse of credit or debit card usages, b...
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Line 7, column 102, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this phenomenon' or 'these phenomena', 'these phenomenons'?
Suggestion: this phenomenon; these phenomena; these phenomenons
...ang of items though, overall outcome of these phenomenon would lead to a detrimental effect not ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77719392957 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617857142857 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1681819321 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117545156126 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386039205842 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444863207384 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729364338735 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469574193635 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.