Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
It is undeniable that online shopping is undergoing an increasing trend in terms of global popularity. Widespread use of online shopping therefore leads to a question about whether shopping on the Internet brings more harms than benefits or not, which still remains controversies. From my perspective, I assume that the advantages of this kind of shopping do outweigh the disadvantages.
On the one hand, it is widely admitted that purchasing goods on the Internet can cause prospect and pessimistic effects on customers. Despite all the prevention and policies aiming to tighten security composed by authorites, cheating and scamming on online shopping still remain almost unchanged. It is reported that thousands of shoppers are scammed while buying products on a daily basis. Discounts and low price are so appealing that some individuals can take advantage of them to bring the buyers to the verge of fraud. Besides, goods inside the parcels can not sometimes resemble those on advertisements. Receiving something that differs from the commerciallly advertised products can upset and provoke the buyers to a certain degree.
On the other hand, there are many reasons why the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. First and foremost, sense of convenience will undoubtedly come towards us during waiting for the shippers since conventional shopping requires us to go outside to buy, but online shopping does not. Secondly, renowned shopping sites like Amazon or Ebay offer a wide range of products with distinctive types and models which cannot be seen while shopping in real life. Therefore, online shopping can be more successful as for satisfying human's demand. Last but not least, exceedingly shopping means less traffic. A reduction in dischagring fumes and greenhouse gases will help better the environment directly.
In conclusion, I think that the advantages of buying things on the Internet has better influence than the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, as for, i think, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43894389439 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00591769313 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623762376238 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7342164852 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207303311184 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634192809855 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582743040596 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137665042223 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582274926217 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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