Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets, and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
In the modern world with the development of technology, online purchasing is becoming more common. In my opinion, I believe that the advantages of shopping will outweigh the disadvantages.
On the one hand, there are several unfavorable factors of shopping on the Internet. Firstly, nowadays, online buyers can easily fall for counterfeit products that may appear authentic. Secondly, online purchases may experience delays due to high demand or weather conditions, leading to longer wait times for delivery. For example, if you buy things on Shopee or Lazada, you will have to wait around a week, depending on the weather or the number of delivered goods, you will have to wait for more than a week.
On the other hand, I believe that the advantages of buying online outweigh the disadvantages. To begin with, buyers can receive a full refund if they are not happy with the commodity. For instance, one of the biggest e-commerce platforms such as Amazon also has a 30- days return guarantee if you are not satisfied with their goods. In addition, in the modern world, many people are busy with their work, so they do not have time to go to the shop to buy the products they want. Therefore, purchasing online will help them save time and not waste travel time. Lastly, online shopping allows consumers to conduct thorough product research without being influenced by sales staff, resulting in more informed purchasing decisions.
In conclusion, although buying things on the Internet has some drawbacks, it seems to me that it is a positive development and people should continue to buy online because of personal benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 511, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will have to wait for more than a week. On the other hand, I believe that the ad...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02962962963 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73521966427 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574074074074 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6875369822 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.461538462 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5384615385 7.06120827912 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176147641177 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652046816682 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511072849332 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121120338655 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407598592873 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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