Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, marketplace on the internet is often used by people. It matters because internet offers easy services and gives discount and refund money. However, buying anything on the internet has some advantages and disadvantages.
On the one hand, many people don’t like to buy something on the internet. The reason is, the photos on the online shop are seems unreliable. For example, now there is a case that buyer don’t get a similar color from the things he/she ordered. It happened because of contrast of the light or lightness of certain photos. However, this problem can be solved if the color is still the same. I mean if the color is yellow, then it still seems yellow and not change onto grey. Furthermore, people should be understood that on the online shop, color might be a bit different from original.
On the other hand, buying things on the internet is too attractive among people. The internet offers such things for people with less cost and time. The online shop also gives some discount to attract people for buying their product. Then, people can save their money without missing things what they want. For instance, now people buy air tickets from certain websites because it easy access and offer refund money. If they ordered air ticket from airport and have some trouble, they should go round-trip to airport, but if they ordered from a certain website they might have easy access to solve it.
Based on past passages, internet gives such offers for people to consume and give the easy access. Eventually, the advantages of shopping from online shop are more than the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... advantages of shopping from online shop are more than the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, then, for example, for instance, i mean, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98534798535 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42295994224 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2233559855 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.6111111111 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190618969986 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657831738364 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528486507254 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126171887005 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408602949924 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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