Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

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In this modern era,consumption of online products is gradually increas...
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...ducts is gradually increasing day by day,although the prize is more or less.However,there...
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...though the prize is more or less.However,there are both pros and cons to deciding to t...
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... both pros and cons to deciding to this.In this essay,I will discuss some of the r...
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...d cons to deciding to this.In this essay,I will discuss some of the reasons why on...
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...ng to this.In this essay,I will discuss some of the reasons why online shopping is so popul...
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...s why online shopping is so popular and some of the challenges to be overcome. Lets be...
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... at the advantages of internet shopping.The first is the rising of discounts,which ...
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...ing.The first is the rising of discounts,which mean offering cash back or offers on th...
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...ing cash back or offers on the products.In other words,whereas 10 years ago,the av...
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...or offers on the products.In other words,whereas 10 years ago,the average family has aro...
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...ucts.In other words,whereas 10 years ago,the average family has around 50$ per month...
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...years ago,the average family has around 50$ per month to spend on groceries and hou...
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...nth to spend on groceries and households,now the figure has dropped to 35$ and so th...
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...ouseholds,now the figure has dropped to 35$ and so the idea of buying something and...
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...something and consumption is remarkable.On the other hand,the second is ample of p...
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...sumption is remarkable.On the other hand,the second is ample of products,which mean ...
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...her hand,the second is ample of products,which mean abundant of choices.For instance,b...
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...products,which mean abundant of choices.For instance,before independence of India t...
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...ch mean abundant of choices.For instance,before independence of India there are only fe...
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...are only few companies for every product,then after multinational companies has arriv...
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... Turning to other side of the argument,by this online consumption,the folks who a...
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... the argument,by this online consumption,the folks who are having shops are been eff...
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... who are having shops are been effected.On the behalf,the local products are safer...
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...ng shops are been effected.On the behalf,the local products are safer than online.Fo...
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...he local products are safer than online.For instance,whereas 10 years ago the consu...
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...ts from the shopkeeper is more than now.On the other hand,the people are becoming ...
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...people are becoming more lazy and clumsy,which causes many health problems.For instanc...
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...more pros than cons in online shopping. Although,it has disadvantages it takes our count...
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...s than cons in online shopping. Although,it has disadvantages it takes our country ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, look, second, so, then, whereas, for instance, i think, in other words, more or less, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53469387755 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.55417640659 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.2975951904 301% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 219.78057239 49.4020404114 445% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 339.0 106.682146367 318% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.25 20.7667163134 295% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.75 7.06120827912 421% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.01903807615 777% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136073669799 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077038709531 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415092220877 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831811985941 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339425242789 0.056905535591 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.2 13.0946893788 269% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.1 50.2224549098 2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 11.3001002004 250% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.68 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.24 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.1190380762 261% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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