Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets, and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
The promotional argument to continue online purchasing are immense and in short to include a few; no queues, instant satisfaction of the purchase (such as e-books or music that is downloaded immediately), speedy feedback on availability, booking and confirmation of payment as well as the ability to review comments and statements by other consumers regarding services and purchases, not to even mention, price comparison!For example, we travelled internationally in September 2019 and received an offer for a large discount on the seats booked for air travel, due to the ability to selectvarious offers and reviewthese and other offers. In contrast, themost negative aspect of online purchasing is that your personal,and more importantly, yourfinancial information,is available to be used by hackers. In which, unfortunately, I have some previous experience of. Whilst booking guesthouses and hotels in a foreign country, we had to include our credit card details to enable reservation of the venues. Before our departure we noticed 2 large and unauthorised withdrawals from our bank account and on further investigation we concluded that it wasfraudulent.The result being that we had to stop the current card and order new credit card, just days before departure. In summary, purchasing goods online removes the frustrationof waiting in long lines and is satisfying together with a multitude of other advantages, nonetheless , the abuse of one’s personal financial data, is certainly a big disadvantage
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- Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? 56
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Unique words percentage: 0.676855895197 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 204.136732499 49.4020404114 413% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 213.0 106.682146367 200% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.1666666667 20.7667163134 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 125.0 5.01903807615 2491% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0380668888644 0.244688304435 16% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0173774993609 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0206764891929 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0380668888644 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.9 13.0946893788 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 15.99 50.2224549098 32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.68 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.38 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 61.0 9.78957915832 623% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 61.0 10.7795591182 566% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.