Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
internet users are increasing tremendiously these days. With low data rate, smart devices, and last mile connectivity has given the internet facility to everybody living in country. The e commerse websites are making good use these oppurtunities and selling almost everything online. purchasing online has its own advantages and disadvantages and my essay is going to discuss it in detail.
Their are many disadvantages of online shopping , Firstly the costumer have to be very cautious in selecting a merchindise from website or he or she can be duped easily. In online purchasing physical verification of product cannot be done so, their is no gaurentee that the original product will be delivered, moreover if original product is their then consumer have to check in which condition it is , it may be possible that it could be a damage product or a used product. In addition to this many people suffered heavy losses due to fraud cases in online payment. The online payment of most of the websites are not secure, and it is becomming a big problems these days, the data base of online payment websites are sold to hackers, they easily hack into personal accounts and gives huge economic loss to people.
Their advantages of online shopping outweigh its disadvantages .First and the most important one is it saves lots of time, it dosent take lot of time to book the desired product. I in big metro cities congestion is big problem.people donot like to go out for shoppoing after a day full of work.The situation becomes even worse when both husband and wife are working , so it is really benificial for such family members to make use of such facility.Besides this online purchasing is really cheap. The online reatiler donot have to own huge shops, and decorate heavily in order to attract the costumer, so he can save the cost incurred in all those things and provides a good discount to costumer.
In conclusion their are always two faces of a coin, but if we make use of online purchase catuiously and it will really make our life easy. if we make use of online shopping carefully , and keep in mind things such as never make a purchase through an unidentified website, and never share the passward and otp of mobile phone with anybody the online shopping is really a boon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, really, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85459183673 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73757407296 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558673469388 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.4765418854 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.384615385 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1538461538 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100651299547 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392474540931 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305457700604 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0649817701768 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257960237747 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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