Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, online shopping is gaining popularity. While there are many advantages to buying online, there are also some drawbacks to consider. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument, and showcase that the benefits override the drawbacks.
Internet shopping can be a big threat to physical stores. This is because people might stop visiting stores in the coming future and choose to buy things on the internet. To illustrate this, some local shops do not have many customers to buy reading materials like books and some grocery stores are already running out of customers. Furthermore, some sellers might not even have the required skills and capability to facilitate online buyers for the products that they sell. As a result, these stores can run out of money and eventually have to shut down.
One of the significant advantages of online shopping can be the saving of time and money. The reason behind this is many consumers can buy things like books for reading and flight tickets from home which do not requires travelling. For instance, these days, online websites facilitate taking orders and delivering the products straight to buyers home. Additionally, these websites have multiple deals and promotions to capture consumers attention. One example of this is the waiving off of the delivery charges. Therefore, the saving of time and money are attracting people towards online shopping and increasing its popularity.
In conclusion, while buying online might create serious problems to local brick-and-mortar sellers, it can be considered cheaper and saves times, which has attracted has been attracting people. In my opinion, there are more advantages than disadvantages to buying online.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: by
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Message: Did you mean 'require'?
Suggestion: require
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31501831502 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74158144781 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56043956044 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0147997496 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6875 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222142779475 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716500109726 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709033152975 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125850486354 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197859333809 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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