Cam 13 test 2 task 2: Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
It is believed that in today’s modern society,due to many factors, we have been given too many choices to choose. I agree with this statement, and my reasons will be explained in the following essay.
Firstly, each individual has a desire to find the best solutions for their problems. So in order to get as much as customers possible, companies keep developing and lauching products to fulfill their needs. For instance, in the cosmetics and skincare industry, depending on the consumer’s preference, manufacturers has to vary every details ranging from ingredient, fragrance to packaging. Because of that, there are plenty of suitable options for one to select.
However, too many choices can lead to confusion, and end up being either complicated or unnecessary. A particular reason for this is looking for the wanted item can be extremely time-consuming, and many people do not have the patience to do that. A principal example for this is online shopping, even if it is the same product, there are many criteria need to be considered before purchasing, such as shipping fee, price, color, material and size. And those things can make a potential buyer frustrated, resulting to not buying anything or buy the product that appears at the front page, leaving the latter ones useless.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that there are too many choices in this day and age. If a person is wealthy enough, they should have their items customized instead of searching and buying available products to not waste time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , due
... believed that in today’s modern society,due to many factors, we have been given too...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08764940239 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84640095225 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653386454183 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1204193666 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.416666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182855359942 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069869141926 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101041325833 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125781879616 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845100191051 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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