Cam 13 test 4 task 2:
In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
In this day and age, despite the help of machinery in agriculture, people around the globe still have nothing to eat. There are many reasons causing to this, and it is time the society took steps to mitigate this problem.
The primary reason why famine is still occurring is because of the rapid growth of population, leading to the ever-growing food demand. So in order to make profit by fulfilling people’s needs, plenty of businesses choose to overexploit the environment, resulting to the depletion of natural resources. Then no matter how much advancing the technology is, without the natural resources, a number of people still have to go through starvation.
There are several viable solutions to deal with this issue. The first solution would be family planning, government should encourage parents to take this serious, and sex education should be added to the curriculum for youngsters. For instance, dates back to a few years ago in China, family planning was made to be compulsory, families were only allowed to have approximately two children, and sex education was also started to be taught to students in schools. These two methods combining together help China to reduce birth rate significantly. Moreover, environmental campaigns should be lauched to raise the public awareness, as well as a new policy with stronger sanctions and penalties should be implemented to prevent unethical companies from overexploiting.
In conclusion, beside the aforementioned reason, there are still various reasons leading to hunger, and in order to solve this, appropriate steps need to be taken to tackle down this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, still, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29230769231 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95754976149 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638461538462 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0878152342 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.090909091 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237422437302 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851962648037 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05816588358 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147990879529 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578495059649 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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