Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam’
How true do you think this statement is?
What measure can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?
The sharp rise in the number of car ownership was recorded appears and becomes worse in many cities in the world now. In my opinion, I significantly agree with this statement and suggest some measures for government to deal with this problem.
One of reasons that affect traffic jam in cities, I believe, is the increase in the number of cars, which is implicated by the quantity of people owning cars. If a person has an individual car, he will trend to driving his car instead of using public transports. Moreover, the increase of ownership can lead to the decrease requirements of sharing car, which also involves to overcrowded vehicle streets.
Regarding with measures, there are some methods that can be potential to solve this issue. Firstly, governments should introduce a law to drop the number of cars traveling in cities, specially the peak hours. For example, in the UK, its government charges fee for movement in the cities, then they recorded that the number of vehicles went down as a result. Or in China, there are a law implements that only cars’ vehicle identified numbers that were even numbers moved in cities on even days per week. Secondly, governments can also decrease the tickets’ price of public transports, such as metro, bus, to support residences’ cities using them. Following by that, traffic jam can also become better.
In conclusion, I believe that the increase in the quantity of car ownership concerns with the worse traffic jam in cities. And there are the solutions to deal with this problem, such as charging fee to cars moving in cities and decreasing the cost of tickets’ public transports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01449275362 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79865917427 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4622414056 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.461538462 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290350607069 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104756029361 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436918655186 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186815030999 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.011000670485 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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