Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'.
How true do you think this statement is?
What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?
Nowdays, automobile ownership has enlarged so at speed over the past thirty years that crowded areas in the world now "one big traffic jam".
First of all, automobile allowed people to move faster from one place to another. This in one's turn dramatically increased people's life pace. Nowadays it is rather difficult to imagine life without a car. People can not do virtually anything without a car. Just imagine for a moment that one, does not have a car. One needs to go an office, get a hair cut, buy some food, watch a movie, meet one's friend, go to study or to work and so on. To get all these done people used a car to move fast from one place to another. People can travel using their own car. It is great because one can travel independently, without any train schedules.
Second of all, the inventions of the automobile has some negative aspects. Looking at all the benefits most people buy cars and in the end in traffic lights, in roads and in the center of cities cork appears, especially an the mornings, when all going to work or studies.
Finally, I assume in order not to be a traffic jam, there are most solutions for this problem. Such as, build underground pedestrians, road bridges or most single tracks. But there is one more solutions to the problem. Increase taxes in car dealership and more recommend ride bicycles. There are useful for health, no air pollutions and there will be no big traffic.
To sum up, I believe that bodies realize this problems and started think about myself and about environment and drive less car.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...nter of cities cork appears, especially an the mornings, when all going to work or...
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Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'an' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: an; the
...nter of cities cork appears, especially an the mornings, when all going to work or stu...
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Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...o sum up, I believe that bodies realize this problems and started think about myself...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, second, so, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64259927798 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48146040472 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595667870036 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0670917054 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4444444444 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3888888889 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345246948166 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100734065932 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686766877216 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155078495061 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770802729495 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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