Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam.
How true do you think this statement is?
What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?
Now a days, traffic congestions has a huge issue because the car owners has upsurge dramatically in last 50 years. Most of the cities facing problems due to the traffic Jams.I agree with this statement and give some reasons behind this negative development and some solutions wil discussed carefully.
There are multifarious reasons behind to this but the main issue is that, most of the people consider cars as the great preferable vehicle to get around.Whenever a person, he easily go to everwhere through the car while, taking a bus, one has to wait and follow the bus schedule.Meanwhile, all private vechicle does not require as much efforts of the walking or taking buses From the great deal of invaluable time saving technique is using their own cars instead of using public transportation.Secondly, public transportation in many states especially in develop countries is very costly. To illustrate, in Canada, new Zealand fares of public vehicles such as taxies and buses increase significantly every year and most people are in the desire of buying their own car rather than the uses of taxi.
On the other hand, there are few things to deal with this traffic congested problems. Firstly, the governer body needs to reduce the prices and improve the public transportation system to be more effective as well as reliable.During to this significant amount of the travellers would go towards the buses and taxies.All traffic problems demolished by to this and solve environmental matters.
In crux, due to the highly cost of public vehicles people use their own cars but if a government develops the public transportation so it will help to declining the number of car drivers smoothly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
Now a days, traffic congestions has a huge issue b...
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Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
Now a days, traffic congestions has a huge issue b...
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Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'upsurged'.
Suggestion: upsurged
...a huge issue because the car owners has upsurge dramatically in last 50 years. Most of ...
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Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...facing problems due to the traffic Jams.I agree with this statement and give some...
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Line 2, column 154, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Whenever
... great preferable vehicle to get around.Whenever a person, he easily go to everwhere thr...
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Line 2, column 183, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'goes'.
Suggestion: goes
...get around.Whenever a person, he easily go to everwhere through the car while, tak...
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Line 2, column 280, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Meanwhile
...has to wait and follow the bus schedule.Meanwhile, all private vechicle does not require ...
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Line 2, column 332, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ll private vechicle does not require as much efforts of the walking or taking buses ...
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Line 2, column 495, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Secondly
... instead of using public transportation.Secondly, public transportation in many states e...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: During
...o be more effective as well as reliable.During to this significant amount of the trave...
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Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: All
...s would go towards the buses and taxies.All traffic problems demolished by to this ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0752688172 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14761874401 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594982078853 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 156.365610291 49.4020404114 317% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 202.285714286 106.682146367 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.8571428571 20.7667163134 192% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.06120827912 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252658405578 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109680676061 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436307385229 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143330482389 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450192664758 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 13.0946893788 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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