causes and effects of sleep late
In this day and age, the issue of sleep deprivation has attracted much concern from the public. This essay aims to analyze some of the root causes of this condition and then investigate some of the detrimental effects of the problem
There are many compelling reasons why sleep deficiency occurs. First and foremost, is the heavy workload of many people today, leading to them immersing in tasks, assignments, and deadlines. In other words, we may find hard workers being too dedicated without being aware of their health. As a result, their sleep time will be spent for extra time of working. Additionally, more and more people are facing insomnia, and mental disorders that have interrupted their sleep constantly. The main reason for this is that a majority of people endure too much stress to the point that their sleep becomes rarer.
Getting less sleep can have numerous negative impacts on our health, both physically and mentally. Firstly, being sleep-deprived can make our body not get enough rest it needed. Consequently, we will be unproductive in our work as our bodies feel drained out, and fatigued. According to a recent survey by Vietnam National University, people with insomnia are 40% less productive as opposed to people with a naturally balanced sleep rhythm. Also, sleep deprivation might be more severe when it comes to mental health. It has been scientifically proven that the risk of mood disorders increases when we don’t get enough sleep. Thus, Sleeping scarcely for a long period would often lead to severe depression and paranoia which is extremely threatening, especially with juveniles.
In conclusion, above are some causes and effects of sleep deprivation. And I recommend the press to propagate more effectively about this condition
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, so, then, thus, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18118466899 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77196917101 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606271777003 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1835598028 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9375 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252704097194 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089920948258 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931904990165 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18433995954 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0932511076488 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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