An increase in production of consumer goods results in damage of the natural environment. What are the causes and possible solutions?
Demand for consumer goods is escalating dramatically that lead to an increase the production to meet up the demand. The grew production leads to damage of the natural environment. This issue has causes consideration concern. What factors lead to this phenomenon and what can be done to solve the problem will be discussed in this essay.
There are numerous reasons why production are increasing day by day. Firstly, as number of population are increased substantially in every year, demand of different products also grew up equally. To meet up the demand, production is also climbed up that affect badly on environment. Secondly, economic growth is proportionally connected with the demand. As world economy is increasing day by day, it lead to increase the demand. For example, in bangladesh, consumers of bevarage industries increased 20% from 2015 to 2020, as GDP increased considerabely. The increase in demand lead to increase in production that play a negative role in environment. Moreover, industrial automation makes everything easy and cheap, lead to increase demand. Different home appliances, interior beauty enhancement products, that people buy these frequently whereas it was unnecessary.
It is not easy to get solution in short time. To prevent the problem, some sustainable steps should be taken such as increase the consciousness about the detrimental effect of unnecessary consumption of goods. Government should be take steps to reduce the production of unnecessary goods such as lipstics, alcohol, drugs, makeup elements, and different types of fastfood. Impose the high on these less necessary elements can reduce the demand can lead to reduce the production. For instance, government of bangladesh imposed high tax on drugs. As a result, drug addiction was decrease substantially.
In conclusion, unnecessary products purchase not only causes the bad impact on environment but also decrease the individual growth. People should more aware about the devasting effect of more consumption. This can decline the production, increase the condition of environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in short, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.534375 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13647736073 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546875 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9472123029 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5454545455 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269293461297 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073505597446 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061687409424 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152235398124 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682302189298 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.2 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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