causes and solution to global warming
Global warming is the increase of earth's average temperature. It is important to establish why this phenomenon has happen and to look at ways to solve it.
There are manifold cause behind this phenomenon. In the first place, it is an indisputable fact that carbon dioxide emissions from coal burning power plant is the mainly reason. When being burnt to make electricity, coal releases a large amount of carbon footprint. According to statistics, in the USA, about 40% of carbon dioxide derive from electricity production. In addition, global warming is resulted from smoke of burning note only coal but also petrol for transport. In the developing countries, motor vehicles running on petrol are responsible for 63 percent of current carbon emissions. Consequently, air polulution is on the rise. Furthermore, cutting down forest are attributed to rising temperature. Tree naturally have an important role in absorbing and capturing carbon dioxide from the atmosphere, however, this process has been disrupted by deforestation. Thus, changes climate is gradually increasing.
Multifarious remedial means car vanish this global menace. Firstly, governments should introduce stricter laws to limits emission from factories. Besides, some renewable resources such as wind or solar power need investing, especially when natural sources are running at an alarming rate. Morover "green taxes" should be imposed to driver and companies to encourage them to talrepublic transport such as: riding a bicycles or walking instead of driving cars. Additionally, planting tress is necessary to cover bald hills.
In conclusion, the measures to tackle global warming are effeetive in prace rather than in theory. This requires responsibility of both government and individuals to address this worring concern.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...nt to establish why this phenomenon has happen and to look at ways to solve it. There...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'means'' or 'mean's'?
Suggestion: means'; mean's
...ally increasing. Multifarious remedial means car vanish this global menace. Firstly,...
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Line 3, column 422, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a bicycle' or simply 'bicycles'?
Suggestion: a bicycle; bicycles
...o talrepublic transport such as: riding a bicycles or walking instead of driving cars. Add...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65808823529 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02531981995 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683823529412 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6170380446 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3157894737 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73684210526 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138158730452 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443485757717 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796002039532 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953144851214 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445619594385 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.