The charts show survey results concerning why MBA graduates chose their degree, and employer's reasons for hiring them.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The provided pie charts depict the data from a survey conducted to know the reason why students chose an MBA degree and the reason why they are preferred by employers.
Overall, the majority of students opt for an MBA degree as they believe there are better job opportunities for an MBA graduate. However, there are multiple aspects like knowledge, personality, appearance, and connections that attract the employer to a larger extent.
Now turning to the details, Around 65 percent of students who chose MBA, believe there are better job opportunities for MBA graduates while 15 percent of them think it enhances their ability to do work better. Out of the rest, twenty percent of the student opt for MBA as twelve percent of them believe it is good for their personal development whereas eight percent of them believe they would be able to help others.
As illustrated in the pie chart, twenty-five percent of employers prefer candidates with better personalities and twenty-five percent require experienced employees. It is has been noticed, experienced employees having connections are preferred by twenty-percent recruiters, and the rest of thirty percent of employers prioritize them by qualifications and the way of presentation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 197.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32487309645 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05306213237 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56345177665 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.03121591 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.857142857 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1428571429 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176330479714 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891305243895 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561059581386 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118798615565 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542552501663 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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