Childern are facing more pressure nowadays from academic, social and Commercial perspectives. What are causes the of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce this problem.
It is incontrovertible fact that the childern are the future and hope of the society. The given topic asserts that nowadays the offspring facing a lot of pressure whereas, the main problem of this pressure are academic, social and commercial perspectives. In this essay, I will examine the possible reasons for this phenomenon and suggest of the practical policies that authorities could implement to reduce this problem.
The first step is to understand why this is happening? Broad speaking, there are three main reasons for this. The first and foremost is the competition between the childern, they are not competing with the one childern and not a specific town. Also, they competing with the global village so, they do study day and night and feel stress in their mind because they have not time for ourselves. Apart from that, the parents want their childern excel in every field and they send their childern in best school where, the syllabus has been very high while, they have lot of burden their studies. Last but not the least, they also face the peer pressure, it act well if the peer are good or if is bad is not disciplined. To epitomize, they see the lot of gadgets like mobile phones and laptops and they want to buy these things when they a unable to do so, they feel stressed.
There is almost certainly no one solution to this problem often given the complexity of its causes. However, one option has to be counselling of the pupils and parents because in this way we aware the parents about this problem. It would be also possible to parents should have realistic expectations from their childern and the school management would be reduce the syllabus in their studies. Furthermore, the extracurricular activities should be promoted in the school which act as a stressbuster like the painting, music activities and so on.
In conclusion, there are variety of different factors that have led to make this problem worse. While, it may not be possible to find a complete solution of this, this could probably be solve by the counselling because it is best way and the people and teachers does not pressurized the childern in their studies and participates in the activity which they have not interested.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, whereas, while, apart from, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8687664042 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66103938466 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496062992126 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4254076696 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.9375 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8125 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238489541532 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824447726815 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849584561991 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173884722368 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096013785861 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.