Children are facing more pressure nowadays from academic dociy and commercial perspectives.what are the cause of this pressure and what measures should be taken to reduce thest pressure?
In today's world, world kinders are pressurized and are facing hardey and harder academic , sociol and commercial challenge .This essay will articulate some of its problems and solutions .
To commence with, many parents force their kinders to do study .To be more precise guardian want their juveniles excel in every field .Children is being gone to best school by their procreators, where the scht bag often heavier than the child himset .Even after school hours there are private tuitions.juvenlies don't have time to bloom and bring out their talents.To epitome it, lawmakers of Japan said that 50 percent student of janpan's schools are not interest in study but they are studying because their parents force them to do study .To mitigate it, one of the major measure is guardian should not force their kinders to study .juvenlies should be motivated by their procreators to do work according to their talents.
On the other hand, they are also many social and commercial pressure.To explicate it, the kinders of today are in a huge dilemma. They want to adopt the global culture, wherease there educator force them to confine themselves to the traditions .This sometimes makes them rebel against rules laid by their elders. Then, they also pressure which can be good of their peer are good, and bad peer are not disciplined .They see the latest models af cell phones and other items with theit peers and want to by them when they are unable to do so, they get stressed .To cope with this , educator should strive to bring out of the best in every child competition and co operation should both be tough simultaneously, the aim of competition should not be to win at all cast. Children have to be taught to win with modesty and lose with grace .
To recapitulate, there is not doubt that the kinders of today are facing so many stresses but step should be tat on a war footing to protect their innocei children, otherwise these pressures will stifle the physical and psychological growth of juveniles .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94658753709 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72717197304 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560830860534 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.585242773 49.4020404114 283% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.7 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.7 20.7667163134 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151077224601 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661280673819 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506463840393 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110606781793 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361430216455 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.