Children are facing more pressure nowdays from academic,social and commercial perspectives .What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these presures?
It is sad but true that , in recent time children are confronting more stress from the academic, social and commercial perspective, there are several reasons for this situation . However some primitive steps can be taken by Goverment to overcome this issues.Both, the causes and remedies are discuss further.
Scrutinising the reasons , the foremost one is parents because heu give more force to children . They are compare their Children with other ,it results children may feel more uncomfortable and loneliness about their life. Besides this , parents want for their children to become more excel in academics as well as in each field , so they give better education and tutors facilities. Also, children want adopt culture , but parents force to confine themselves to be in tradition and show them their boundaries . However , children are not focus on academics and take stress as well as theu easly distracted from their goals.
In order to improve this situation some steps can be taken . The most effective suggestion is that government should take care of children to create new syllabus and need proper management, nowadays children schools bags are very heavier than their weight to overcome this problem government ought to take only main subjects for children. To add to thos parents take care of their children and better consultants or counselor to get out
From children stress , also parents give better culture and give grain activities to grow up their child . Moreover , patents should to choose right path for career , so children make and achieve their goals and they can success in their life. For example government should take responsibility to provide better job for new generation ,it induce to take less stress and do not take unappreciate decision for their career.
To sum up , it can be eventually stated that , increase of pressure on children in education , social and commercial perspectives. This must be taken seriously; and practical and effective solution by the government to create new syllabus in school and parents take care more about their children .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22985074627 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72067670104 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507462686567 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8698318841 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.142857143 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168980541719 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760456906776 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402879413403 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11699641261 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488375439412 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.